Saturday, June 30, 2012

Dreams

Written for :


Castle of sands
blown in the wind,
World of dreams
pulverize by my owns,
Hampering even my small steps,
their words reproached
and haunts.
But I no longer listen
to their taunts.
Following my dreams
I will build my home again
Not castle in the air,
But in actuality.

PS: It is my first attempt for the Three Word Wednesday. Hope you like my effort, if you do or if you don't like it, please let me know about it. And now when you have read my request, sincerely fill the comment form below. :P 

19 comments:

  1. I have been following your work only for a short while, so it might be presumptuous of me to comment, but reading this one, I felt compelled. The emotion in your writing is very strong, and you do not hesitate to call language to obey your orders to express them. You may want to keep an eye out every time you choose to bend language to be certain that the balance between breaking rules and creating a word picture is maintained. Really appreciate your journey. This poem (I am not particularly fond of writing based on prompts) is nice.

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    1. Thank you for reading and commenting, Sir. I am glad you liked my poem and appreciate my work, I am grateful to you for following my work.

      Keep reading and thank you once again.. :)

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  2. Lovely writing, Anjali and following the dreams is the way to go:)

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  3. I dont like your effort, I LOVE them!! Great going Anjali, I am sure you will build a very beautiful castle in actuality and my best wishes for you! :)

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    1. Thank you a lot for reading, Arti and taking time to comment. You made me really happy and you inspires me a lot. Happy to see you on my blog :)

      The castle is under-constuction right now .. :P

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  4. best wishes Anjali for your dream home...wishes from an Architect :)

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    1. Thank you for the good wishes Architect sir.. And I hope I can expect you to help me in designing my dream home.. :)

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    2. So nice of you. Thank you so much :)

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    1. Thank you for reading and liking it .. :)

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    1. Welcome here Ankit !
      Thank you for liking it and for following my blog.. :)

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  7. Very positive Anjali. Very well composed.
    Last line says it all :)

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    1. Thank you a ton, Mak. I am glad you liked it :)

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  8. Hello.
    Very nicely penned. Hope you manage to build that dream home (smile). Thanks for sharing.

    If you have time, come try your hand at the Lovers' Cove Challenge. All you need do is write 15 words are less, BUT your line has to continue on in thought from the previous person in the Linky...that's the challenge! Hope you can make it! For more, click here...

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    1. Welcome here Andy! I am delighted with your presence on my blog. Thank you for liking it.

      That's interesting and very creative. I would definitely try to participate in the coming challenge, though I am not so creative but I would try.

      Thank you for stopping by and telling me about this wonderful challenge. :)

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  9. nicely written,,,
    world of dreams,
    pulverized by own...

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    1. I am glad with your nice comment, Gunjan. Thank you :)

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